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Reviewer: wingnut1974 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2013 12:44 AM · On: Epilogue
OMG, this story made me cry. you did a wonderful job on it
Reviewer: Sisa (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 06:58 PM · On: Part 1
I just finished this story on second try because after Brian died I had to stop. But I braced myself and read again for second time. I donť remember time when I cried so much but story is great. I especially love the letters that Justin write to Brian. Sad but great story!
Reviewer: NoChaser (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 04:09 PM · On: Epilogue
‘Show me a hero and I'll write you a tragedy'.
This is absolutely one of my top ten favorite stories anywhere. It tore my heart out and made me happy to go on the ride.
Well, well written and told.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 07:59 PM · On: Epilogue
Congrats on having your story picked for this month. I found it very moving, well written and one that I won't forget.
Lori
Author's Response: I can't think of a nicer compliment for a story than for it to be remembered after the window closes. Thank you so much, and for taking the time to let me know. I appreciate it so much.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 05:30 AM · On: Epilogue
This story has been selected by a secret cyber fairy to be our Featured Story for June, 2012. Thank you for sharing it on Whispers.
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you, and thank you to the secret cyber fairy. I'm honored and thrilled to know that people are still finding or re-reading Valediction. Endless thanks to CowLip and to Gale & Randy for bringing life to my two favorite people of all time (even if you can't tell by the things I've done to them here ;-). Brian & Justin forever!
Reviewer: lrknow (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2012 03:52 PM · On: Epilogue
Beautiful, heart breaking yet soothing and hopeful...maybe I can comment more coherently after I'm done bawling my eyes out...it just killed me..reminds me why I don't usually read death fic,it's so exhausting, but i don't regret it one bit, cause all through it you let their love shine through. Thank you
Author's Response: "Hopeful" I love that word! And I love that you took that from the story, because it's true. It really is all about love, and yeah, heartbreak and pain, too - but hope at the end of it all. I'm very happy that you've no regrets after taking a chance on a death-fic. That is the best compliment I can think of. Thank you for that, and for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it very much.
Reviewer: Corinne_K (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2012 12:56 AM · On: Part 1
thank you for your warm response!! I am so moved, really
The "rightness" of Brian´s death, yes, that's exactly what I mean, and I am so happy I´m not the only one who does NOT think this idea is totally crazy. I´ll never believe that this idea never emerged in the scriptwriters' minds, and yes, we can see it in Brian's. And I don't believe it's only my fantasy that they may have opted for a suicide or cancer return for Brian Kinney if Gale Harold had said he was going to quit before the show was over:) they would, I'm sure, have come up with something for any other character's death if they didn't like the simple idea of taking himher away^) but I have always thought it would have been the most natural and smooth thing for Brian, rather than for someone else. If one can use these words to speak about anybody's death:( Because he is so... perfect, so beautiful. A pure soul. Someone to shine through Justin´s life no matter what happens, wherever he goes. How else could that be? (Jesus, look at me, I cried my eyes out when I was reading the most angsty part of your story, I don't like deathfics much because real life is pretty angsty itself, and yet I say it is the "right" thing!).
I hope I am not being too kinky here **smiles through tears**
I have some thoughts to share about the Justin (and folks) part of your story which I love soooo much too, it evokes so many feelings, so overwhelming, so much love, no, LOVE for Justin. So I'll come back;) It is just the saddest part of the story goes first, though I never stopped crying all the way through to the epilogue.
The epitaph... it gave me goosebumps. Oh yes... He knew. He knows. They both know. Always have, always will. *sobs*
thank you
Author's Response: As much as I think it would have been the most riveting episode of television, ever, I think CowLip would have had to go into witness protection if they'd killed off Brian Kinney. LOL! It would have made quite an alternate ending though, wouldn't it? I am such a sucker for these kinds of storylines though. For me, the fantasy angst is actually a relief from the angst of real life. I love sad movies, sad songs, sad.... commercials. *sob* I think maybe it's because having your heart broken (ficticiously) reminds you that you have one, you know? A good cry every now and then is kind of a balm to the soul. I love the idea of Justin loving Brian forever, beyond death, but not dying along with him. It's a tribute to both of them.
I love reading your thoughts on the story and I look forward to any others you care to share with me. Thank you again!
Reviewer: Corinne_K (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2012 09:27 PM · On: Part 1
I am speechless. This is amazing, incredible, absolutely brilliant and totally heartbreaking. So sad and so beautiful. I read the first three chapters at work (it wasn't the right thing to do, I know, but I couldn't help it) and went out right after that to get some fresh air AND to cry and to take some time before getting back to reading the rest of it:((
I am not into deathfics in particular, but this one is a gem. Deep inside, I have always had this strange feeling that Brian's death would have been something in line with the plot and a logical step for all the characters. He IS perfection while everybody else is as imperfect as human can be, but does perfection exist? He should have died a legend and remain a legend in his friends' hearts, and never be forgotten. And you made him one.
So, from the point of view of the dramatic art I felt it was the right step; personally, emotionally I have all my sympathies on his side => you pleased my need for both with this most touching and emotionally charged story, and ther's love in every single line of it. You ARE a gifted writer (well I am sure you already know it by now:))
*sniffs* still, can't get the picture of Brian's tombstone out of my mind and it brings back memories somehow... people in my life who I loved and lost (((
I'd say "thank you" but it is too small a word to express my thanks...
HUGS and MORE HUGS and EVEN MORE HUGS
Take care,
K.
(as I said, English is not my native language, forgive me if I sound awkward)
Author's Response: Oh my, you have made my afternoon (and quite possibly my day, week and month) with your comment. I've said it many times, but it's worth saying again - I appreciate every single person who reads, but I have a special place for those who don't like deathfics, but take a chance anyway and find that the story captures them. It really is a love story, not a death story. Your comment about the 'right-ness' of Brian's death really struck me. I'm not sure I've ever heard this expressed before in this fandom, and I have to say - it's fascinating. He toyed with the idea himself, more than once, didn't he? The scarfing, the plan to go to 'Ibiza' (and I will always believe that was his plan until his encounter with Justin in his office). I think this Brian, who resisted those demons and came out on top, ready to commit to his blond boy and take on the world - this Brian really would have lived forever in their hearts. I am just so proud that you feel I accomplished that with my story. Thank you so, so much.
Do you know the translation of the words Justin chose for Brian's epitaph? Nunc scio sid amor. Now I know what love is. I think they applied equally, to both our boys, and they taught me a whole lot more about it, too.
And your English is just lovely. Perfect, really. Many, many hugs in return.
q_dicted
Reviewer: moonshinekinney (Anonymous) · Date: November 14, 2011 09:18 AM · On: Part 1
Oh my, this is wonderful! I honestly wish this would have happened on the show. To be honst, I like it better! ;)
Off to read the enxt one!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hope you still feel the same after you're finished. (((hugs)))
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 01:46 AM · On: Epilogue
I KNOW I HAVE COMMENTTED BEFORE, BUT I AM JUST GOING TO AGAIN. JUST FINISHED RE-READING THIS STORY AND TEARS ARE RUNNING DOWN MY FACE AND EVEN THOUGH I KNEW WHAT WAS COMING, I STILL CONTINUED TO READ ON... WORDS CAN NOT EXPRESS HOW I FEEL AT THE MOMENT. I WISH I KNEW WHERE YOU LIVE SO THAT I CAN COME OVER AND HUG YOU AND TELL YOU WELL DONE IN PERSON. THIS IS ONE OF MY ALL TIME FAV STORIES AND I LOOK FORWARD TO RE-READING IT AGAIN IN THE FUTURE. THANK YOU :o)
Author's Response: Thank you so much - I consider this a most excellent virtual hug! I love knowing that people actually re-read this story considering how difficult (if not impossible) it is to get people to read a deathfic at all! So thank you for that, and for letting me know.
Reviewer: soul1essharpy (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 07:04 PM · On: Epilogue
*Huge exhale* What to say? There really aren't proper words for how this story affected me. Powerful, heart-wrenching, and perfect are a few that come to mind, but somehow don't seem to be strong enough or close enough, but that's what I've come up with, so they will have to do.
I am never really one for death fiction, as a whole, but took a chance on this one and I am glad I did. It made me cry numerous times, but...it also made me laugh and feel happy. I know, odd for a death fic, but true nonetheless. Thank you for sharing this story and I can't wait to get a chance to read more of your work
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I appreciate every reader more than I can say, but I have a special soft spot for those who have an aversion to death fics but took the chance anyway. Your kind words and amazing compliment mean so much. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2011 07:26 PM · On: Epilogue
You story has been selected to be a Best Fan Fiction Classic on Whispers.
Author's Response: Wow! Well thank you so very much to whoever it is that decides such things. I am honored!
Reviewer: The Black Rose (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 07:47 PM · On: Epilogue
heartbreakingly beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I appreciate the compliment.
Reviewer: Cheryl (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2011 05:17 PM · On: Epilogue
This is such a good story. I've read it at least 4 times now and each time I cry. I have one suggestion that would help the reader - please explain the latin phrase that is on Brian's headstone.
Keep up the excellent work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's great to know that you read it more than once (especially since some have told me they can't get through it once :-/ ) I actually went back and forth a while on whether or not to include the translation of the epitaph. I did kind of refer to it later (in Justin's epilogue, when he finds the bracelet and says 'now I know, too). I hope that people care enough about the story to look it up. I thought a long time about what to say that wouldn't make Brian's eyes roll too hard *g* 'Now I know what love is' seemed appropriate... from both men's perspectives.
Again, thank you so much for taking the time to comment and for the compliment. It means the world to me to know people are reading and enjoying!
Reviewer: Linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2011 10:37 PM · On: Part 1
I thought Titanic was the best and most heart breaking story, but you beat that. I can't stop crying. You're writing is incredible. Don't stop!!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. What an incredibly nice thing to say. I'm happy to know you enjoyed it and really appreciate you letting me know.
Reviewer: reiselust161 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Epilogue
I have to tell you that I was very moved by this story, in the third chapter you just had me in tears. How well described and at the same time totally sad what happened to Brian, you did a very good job. I am happy to have discovered the story recently to be able to finish it in a row and not having to wait, I think that just would have killed me waiting for you to continue.
Hope to read more from you soon, this was a sad but nevertheless wonderful story, perfectly written! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I am very pleased to have a new reader - I know what you mean about reading a WIP and I'm glad you enjoyed it as a complete story. Thank you for taking the time to comment and for the compliment. I appreciate them both very much.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Part 6
Even though I want to hate you for killing off the ficitional love of my life, I have to say that this was one of the best stories I have read. Even when I could not see through all the tears I could not tear myself away! I seriously hope to see more stories from you!
Author's Response: Ahhh, believe me, I hated myself at times! I just try to think of it as a 60,000 word tribute to the love of our lives. Thank you so much for the compliment and the comment. I really appreciate them both so much.
Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2010 05:09 AM · On: Epilogue
Ohhh...
this story just... well let's say it deserved that rubon bleu.
And it made me cry.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Sorry about the tears ((hugs)). I am still amazed at the ribbon!
Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 12:02 AM · On: Epilogue
I am not a major fan of death fics for obvious reasons, but I must say your red ribbon is well deserved. You have crafted a beautiful story and even though right now I can't breath due to the lump in my throat and having a hard time seeing due to the tears in my eyes I'm glad I took the time to see it through. I hope to see more of your work in the future.
Author's Response: I understand that stories about one of our beloved boys dying are a difficult read, and I really, really appreciate those who take the chance on it, because in the end it is all about the love of and for some very special characters. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: TECH SUPPORT (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Part 5
Per Elsa Rose - raised to blue ribbon status as an outstanding story.
Author's Response: Oh wow. I don't know what to say except thank you so very much. I am so happy I found this show, these characters and the wonderful world of QaF fan fiction. I'm proud to be a part of it!
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Epilogue
What a heartwrenching, superbly written story. So much emotion pouring out from every sentence. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you! It was emotional to write, too. I really appreciate the compliment and the comment, it means so very much.
Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Part 1
Normally I don't read death fic but this one had be intrigued.
So beautifully written and powerful--rips the heart and tears right out of you. The epilogue is so bittersweet. This really does deserve a blue ribbon.
It's a story I will remember and reflect upon...and may even come back to read it again sometime in the future when I'm not feeling so raw.
Very well done. Looking forward to reading more from you.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I really feel like the story was a tribute to both Brian and Justin and their love more than a story about a death. I really appreciate that you took a chance on it and thrilled that you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting. And I'm thrilled with the Red Ribbon - it was an unexpected and very cool surprise.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 03:23 AM · On: Epilogue
As much as it pained me to read I can see that Kinnetik couldn't really go on without Brian. Reading how the years went by...was enough to make me cry. But one thing is certain. Brian Kinney will always be young and beautiful.
Thank you for a lovely story.
Author's Response: Brian Kinney will always be young and beautiful, and he is still alive as long as those who loved him so much remember. Thank you so much for the comments (every chapter!!!) and for taking the time. It means so very much.
Reviewer: TECH SUPPORT (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 03:01 AM · On: Epilogue
Although not a story for everyone with limited reader responses - this is very excellent writing - honorably noticed and featured with a Red Ribbon (at this time).
UPDATE: Use of red ribbons stopped; blue ribbon awarded later.
Author's Response:
Wow! This is amazing. I do understand that death fiction is not for everyone, which is why I am so thrilled that people have taken a chance on it, even if they don't always comment. I am thrilled to have the Red Ribbon beside Valediction, my first and only (so far) QaF fiction. Thank you so much!!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 02:59 AM · On: Part 6
You know in some ways this is a far better ending then the series. In your story there is closure, in the series you're left to wonder. Makes for great stories, the what happened next. Craig Taylor is a bastard and needs to be punished, but if your version had been used, we know that would never have happened. Now on to the epilogue.
Author's Response: What an amazing compliment! QaF is one of the most amazing shows ever to be on television so I take that as high praise indeed. Thank you so much. (And yes, Craig is a monster, just like Justin said.)
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