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Reviewer: RC (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 6
Love your story! Have been reading it again and again, hoping for new chapters. Can't wait until there is more. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 6
i love it.
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2010 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 6
michael's an idiot still. daphne and chris are friends? chris and justin are friends? ok.
so justin has a meeting with brian. should be good.
Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 4
nice.
Reviewer: Yaz (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2010 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 5
I love the story line.
It is great how you incorporated CSI:NY to bring in Justin and soon Brian.
Looking forward to the rest of the story. Hope you complete it.
Great writer.
Debbie
Author's Response: sorry this is a bit late i work nights and all i do is sleep, eat and work lol.
to be honest i've always thought i was a crap writer i'm just having a bit of fun.
next part is up.
thanks for the review it helps a lot.
Yaz =) xxx
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 3
good.
Reviewer: Alyse_SaFyre (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 3
Aww! Yea, love it! Great idea for a crossover! Jenn is kinda a bitch for just leaving him on the doorstep, not even tellin her future hubby that she had a baby in the first place...that sucks..
Maybe you could make longer chapters? That'd be great! =) Can't wait for the next chapter! Don't forget that the first letter in your sentences should be Capitalized, even the talking! =) Happy Writing!
<3Alyse
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I know the chapters need to be longer and I am trying by merging the chapters that I have got in my notebook and it seems to be working which is good lol. More will be up soon, I'm about to start the next chapter =). Yaz :) X
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 3
i love it
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Yaz :) X
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 3
i love it
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Yaz :) X
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 2
poor danny i love it
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Yaz :) X
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
i love it
Reviewer: msv713 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 2
I like! Very interested on this different approach and where you are going to take it. Look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I have had it written in a notebook since I was 17, well only a couple of chapters I thought i'd post it just see if I can get any insperation, to try and and finish it. i'm glad you like it so far, more will be coming soon. Yaz :) X
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 2
i'm interested.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Yaz :) X
Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well... Let's have some more and then I promise to tell you what I think. But it is is an interesting approach and I look forward to more AND I'm so glad we have a new MW writer!!!
In the mean time may I suggest you fix the spelling mistakes... for me spelling mistakes can ruin an otherwise good story. I'll add that English is not my native language but I make use of spelling programs online (they really make me "look" better, I'm a bit dyslectic so I do this with my work and everyday correspondence 'cause it can be embarrassing... but then I also do this for my ego 'cause my boss is soooooo much worse than me that he has not complained yet....
Author's Response: Well Thank you :). I know what you mean because English is my first and native language and i still have trouble with my spelling. There is also nothing wrong being dyslectic, some of my friends are and some of my college tutors were. More is on the way. I really hope you enjoy my story. Yaz :) X
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