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Reviewer: Tagsit (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 06:52 AM · On: Love Me Tender

Very fun little story. The first part was very "Comedy of Errors" - Shakespear would have been proud. The second part was just plain sweet - coming of age stuff. Nice though in a non-angsty sort of way. I enjoyed. Thanks for writing. TAG

P.S. I'm taking a break from writing and decided to read ALL your stories. That should keep me occupied for a day or two! He he he. Thanks for being so prolific.



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag - thanks for reading and for the comments, my dear.  I should probably take a little break myself; between this horrid cold I have (probably thanks to one of my students) and this writer's block, I'm not getting much done in the way of my next update to "Heart's Desire."  Ugh.  But I will push my way through it somehow; I have about half of it written so far.  I'm very flattered that you're spending your break reading my stories; I do hope you enjoy them.  Thanks for taking the time to leave me feedback, too; as a fellow writer you know how meaningful that is to me.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 05:13 AM · On: I Can't Help Falling In Love With You

What a fun story.  Gus likes Rob and Rob likes Justin.  It should make for an interesting time.  I can't wait to read more but its time for bed, so till tomorrow.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandy!  Thanks for giving this one a try!  I hope you enjoy it.  It IS a sort of triangular mess at first, isn't, kind of like a soap opera - ha!  Thanks for the comments, my friend.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Sasha (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 08:57 AM · On: Love Me Tender

Hey!
A very nice story. It was fun, made me a little worried about Brians reaction and it definitely mad me laugh. Thank you for writing and posting.
Sasha

Author's Response:

Hi, Sasha! Thanks, my friend, for reading and for taking the time to leave me feedback; I really appreciate it.  This probably had one of the dorkiest-looking banners I've ever made, but I'm glad you saw past that and read it anyway - ha!  Thanks again fro taking the time to leave a comment.:)  *Hug*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: soul1essharpy (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2012 02:17 PM · On: Love Me Tender

*girly fit of squee* OMG, I SO loved this!

I just ADORE a jealous and possessive!Brian. It's just so damn sexy *growl*

*huggles you to bits*

Author's Response:

Hi, Tammy, my friend!  I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, Sweetie!  Thanks for reading and for the comments; and thanks for all of your support of my stories - I really appreciate that!  I know you're probably waiting anxiously for the next chapter of "Parent Trap," BTW; and I promise to get to that one just as soon as I can.  But I really feel like I need to work on "Heart's Desire" and "Paper Hearts" next for those who have been waiting for updates.  And at the risk of having to hide under my desk again, something tells me that I won't be able to resist writing at least a one-shot for Valentine's Day (ducking now.....).....

Thanks again for being such a wonderful supporter of my stories!  I promise to keep updating all of them just as quickly as I can.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2012 03:20 AM · On: Love Me Tender

Gus is sweet. It made me laugh when he thought things like "I thought I'd never" and the relationship was "finally" consummated after a whole "few days." I enjoyed this series. But now.... on to PHK and HD!!!

Author's Response:

Hi, Kate!  Yes I suppose it was fast, but with teens I think they want everything 'now,' so perhaps to Gus it did take longer than he would have wanted.:)  I'm glad you enjoyed the story and as always thank you for the feedback.:)

I AM working on the next part of "My Heart's Desire" right now - have a ways to go yet, but it's slowly getting there.:)  I promise to get it posted just as soon as I can.  Thanks again for your support.:)  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2012 12:45 AM · On: Love Me Tender

Brian is incorrigible to ask his son how big .... though, its really a nice story, I loved a lot.



Author's Response:

LOL!  Well, some things never change do they?  Thank you again for reading and having faith in me to write a story that you would enjoy.:)  And thank you for all the support you've given me.:)  I hope I can continue to earn your support in the future and you will continue to enjoy them!  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 11:30 PM · On: Don't Be Cruel

Thank God, no subterfuge or twisted complications, just plain honesty - I really like the talk between Justin and Rob, that he got not some Brian-lines "... in your dreams..."

You wrote, that you understand, that not everyone likes Elvis in the assumption, that this was the reason I skiped this story. But I like his songs. It was just the (in my opinion) rather strange title and Justin looks like e clown in the banner. But please, no offense meant!

Oh, and btw, it seems I can't review fast enough for your replys to it, thank you for this, too. I just hope my english is good enough, I'm often unsure about which word to elect and so on...

 



Author's Response:

Don't worry; your English is fine!:)  And I agree; Justin does look kind of dorky in the banner, doesn't he?  LOL!  But I'm glad you gave it a chance anyway.:)  I think Rob will come to realize what a great guy Gus is; thanks again for all the feedback! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

P.S.  And you're welcome for the replies; I'm not usually THIS fast, but I happen to be working on the next chapter of "My Heart's Desire" and get a notice when I receive an email; unlike Justin in "Paper Heart's" I am definitely NOT psychic!  LOL!  Thanks again.:)

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 11:20 PM · On: Love Me Tender

“Well, all I can say is Porter is damn lucky.”

Brian was still adorable as the jealous husband. I'm glad things worked out for Gus.

Loved it and thanks again for the story!

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra, my friend!  Thank you for reading my story and commenting on it.:)  And thanks for all the support you've given me. 

Poor Brian; I just can't stop tormenting him - ha!  But I DO love it when he gets jealous, even if it IS unfounded.  I think one of these days I may just give him a run for his money and write a story where I give him some serious competition for Justin.  I would love to see him competing seriously for Justin's affections.  Of course, we all know how it would turn out though.:) 

Thank you again for all the feedback; I hope you know how much I love it and how grateful I am.  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 10:40 PM · On: Suspicious Minds

It's surprising how fast Brian goes from angry to amused if he doesn't feel threatened any more.  But I'm a little bothered by, how Brian again and again distrusts Justin; I'd not be  happy about it.



Author's Response:

(Sigh...) Yes, when it comes to the man he loves, Brian's common sense sort of flies right out the window!  But if it's any consolation, I think he will help right things for his son in the coming chapters.  Thanks again for reading and for the feedback!:)

Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 09:45 PM · On: I Can't Help Falling In Love With You

After you described Justin gyrating his hips, I stop reading and went to youtube to see Elvis doing the song and now I'd really like to see Randy singing this song and dancing to it - you put an image in my head I'll never forget.

For Gus being hot for a guy who is hot for Justin - hard lesson upon him, I guess.



Author's Response:

I could see Randy doing this, too; in fact, he was doing a little bit of exactly that when he sang in "Tommy!" (Yum...!).  He has a beautiful singing voice that really doesn't do him justice in the You Tube videos; so clear and strong.  Can't wait to see him in another musical someday! I'm going to see him in "Red" next month - I understand he will be on stage pretty much the whole time, too - can't wait!!  Thanks again for giving this story a chance.:)  *hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 08:49 PM · On: You're The Devil In Disguise

I see, I deprived myself of a good story because of the title and the banner for it. They just aren't my cuppa and so I ignored the story. But as I said in my review for the prequel I was in the spirit for something other and now I'm trying ;-) And so far off to chapter two.



Author's Response:

Thanks for giving this one a try!  I hope you will enjoy it.  Yeah, Elvis isn't everyone's cup of tea, and even I admit the banner's a little hokey - ha!  But I DO hope you will like it when you get finished.  Thanks again for all the support.:)  *Hugs*

Kimberly

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2012 07:19 PM · On: Love Me Tender

Just thought I'd leave this info for you.  If your new chapters come up I have asked BB to review in my absence.  I have to go to Toronto-my aunt is not going to last too long and I want to see her before she passes.  They have only given her a few days so I'm not sure when I will be returning.  Didn't want you to think I had deserted you. lol



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie.  So sorry to hear about your aunt - I will keep her in my thoughts and prayers.  I'm sure you will be a big comfort to her.  Please have a safe journey there and back, and I will be looking forward to your return.  In the meantime, I'm sure Brian will do an admirable story-telling job in your absence.:)  Take care and I'll be thinking of you.  *hugs*~Kimberly


 

Reviewer: Benny (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2012 04:38 PM · On: Love Me Tender

This was adorable with a heaping side of sexy. Very enjoyable. Thank you. -Benny

Author's Response:

Aww...thank you, Benny!  So glad that you enjoyed it, my friend.  Thank you for reading and especially leaving me feedback; I appreciate all your support of my stories, and I hope I can continue to entertain you with them for a long time to come.  Thanks again!  *Hugs*~Kimberly

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2012 08:28 AM · On: Love Me Tender

Oh, I absolutely LOVED this chapter!!!!!!!!!! It was great!!!! A really great story! I hope to read you again in the near future!!! Kisses!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, sweetie!  I'm so delighted that you liked it!  You're very kind.:)  I hope you will continue to enjoy my stories.  Thank you again!  *Hugs*~Kimberly

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 05:44 PM · On: It's Now Or Never

This was my favorite chapter. I loved the Elvis word/song play.The Banter between Brian and Justin was as entertaining as usual.

I thought the advice Brian gave to Justin about Gus not falling apart if things don't work out was very on target and showed just how intelligent and how much Brian has matured from being the Stud of Liberty Avenue.

Gus and Rob were so cute together!. I pray it works out.

Author's Response:

Hi Sweetie! Thanks as always for the wonderful feedback; I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!  I'm not sure if I will have a chance to revisit the 'new lovebirds' in the future, but something tells me they will be getting along quite nicely.:)  Thanks again for taking the time to review and for all your support over the past several months; I am very grateful.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

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Reviewer: Sab123 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 03:07 PM · On: Love Me Tender

Thank you! What a lovely and funny story.

“So tell me; how big IS his dick?”

I almost spilled my coffee over the keyboard reading this. Hilarious. As always, your characters feel like real persons. And that was exactly the question I would expect from Brian in this situation.

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Sabine!  So glad you enjoyed this one, my friend!  You know Brian would be concerned about "quality," didn't you?  LOL!  Thank you for the lovely comments about my writing - I am very honored.  And THANK YOU for all the reviews and feedback that you continue to give me - that is so appreciated!  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 01:20 PM · On: Love Me Tender

Oh great chapter I loved the lots of double entrendre's and gentleness. You can feel how compassionate Gus is and how in love these two boys are going to be. Snarky teasing Brian always works lol thanks hun for another winner hugs Chris  



Author's Response:

Thank you for the feedback, Chris!  Glad that you liked it, although it IS a little weird writing about Gus having sex - LOL!  I guess we all grow up (even Brian - ha!)   Thanks for all your support, my friend.  *Hugs*~Kimberly

Reviewer: zelldrake (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 09:59 AM · On: Love Me Tender

to bad its over but it was good thanks for doing this



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - I know you were waiting for this chapter.:)  Thanks for the kind words; I really appreciate it.:)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 09:58 AM · On: Love Me Tender

woww great title of this chapter "love me tender" there was lots of love and it was really tender and so sweet. Love Gus and Rob together.

 “So tell me; how big IS his dick?”  ohhh Briannn !!! LOL

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Ha!  You know Brian - has to get the 'important' things out of the way first - LOL!  So glad you liked it, my friend.:)  Thanks as always for all the support you've given me.:)  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 06:43 AM · On: Love Me Tender

terrific ending - loved the enounter with the younger set...tender and sweet, and yet really really hot!

this story was a hoot - and it made me smile

Charle



Author's Response:

Thank you, Charle.  You're so good about reviewing for me; I do appreciate that so much, my friend.:)  It was a little strange writing about Gus being all grown up, I must admit; but I'm glad that you liked it.  Thanks so much for all your support, Sweetie.:)  *Big* hug to you.~Kimberly

Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2012 04:42 AM · On: Love Me Tender

Wow what a ending.  I knew love me tender would be the name of this chapter.  It fit so well.  Well Gus all grown up now just like his dad. The boys liked all the funnies in this chapter and Justin's little dance number was so cute.  I can just picture it.  Well girl whats up next parent trap or paper hearts?  maybe even our foursome on the political trail.  I think all of us are waiting for parent trap reunion next. We, however, are just the peanut gallery sooooo whatever you decide will be ok with us. Having a quiet night here-a rarity for us so I am reading some of your older stories.  Fun night.  lol



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend!  I'm glad you were all able to take a small break for a change.:)  And thank you for rereading some of my stories again - I'm very flattered.:)  I'm still debating where to go next for an update - I really need to work on "Heart's Desire," because it's up next in the rotation.  So I probably will go there next (hiding under desk...).  I know everyone's anxious for the next chapter of "Parent Trap," but if I'm evil enough, if I hold out a little longer before I write it maybe I'll get more reviews then - LOL!  Seriously, I feel like I've been neglecting my other stories so I really need to go back to them first. 

Say hello to everyone for me - and tell Lee to make sure he keeps the "Lucky Devil" nice and clean now - ha!  Thanks again to all of you for your continuing support.  *Big Hug*

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 02:45 AM · On: Love Me Tender

The sexy parts were steamy and the humor, as always, is there.  Thanks for a fun trip with the boys.   Gus and Rob are great together.

-  Jackie



Author's Response:

Thank you, dear!  As always I appreciate your kind feedback.:)  I felt a little weird writing about Gus having sex after he was five years old on the show - ha!  But I'm glad you approve.:)  Thanks so much for reading and for the comments.:)  *Hugs*

Kimberly

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2012 01:36 AM · On: Love Me Tender

Tour Graceland...ha ha ha....I found that hilarious!!!  There were so many more but that one just stuck to me.

This piece is definately one of my favorites. Completely enjoyed it. Excellent writing as usual.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback!  Yeah, I kind of liked that one, too - ha!  Nothing but the 'premium tour' for Brian - LOL!  Thanks again for reading and for the wonderful feedback; I am very grateful.  I hope you will continue to enjoy my other stories for a long time to come.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kimberly

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2012 10:31 PM · On: It's Now Or Never

I absolutely love the buildup here between Gus and Rob. Justin being Justin, and Brian being Brian - we never actually had the chance to watch them 'fall in love'. Being able to watch Rob as he becomes aware of Gus in a whole new way, and Gus as he worries over all the 'normal' new relationship stuff is just such a treat. Really like this chapter alot!

Charle



Author's Response:

Thank you, dear friend; as always I love your kind feedback.:)  So glad you enjoyed this one; I should have the last (next) chapter posted very shortly. Thank you for all the support - you're very special.:)  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2012 09:17 PM · On: It's Now Or Never

I loved it, as I knew I would... great chapter! I can't wait to read what happens next!!! i hope to read you soon.... kisses!!



Author's Response:

Awww....thank you so much for the lovely comments!  I'm so delighted that you liked it!  I will get the final part posted sometime today; I hope you will continue to read and enjoy it as well.  Thanks again for taking the time to leave me feedback; I greatly appreciate that.:)  *Hugs* ~Kimberly

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