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Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 39: Double Trouble
Ha!!! Is Jack going to have a heart attack? Lol. You need to finish this....please!!!
Author's Response: I do have the next chapter of this one already written but I'm trying to hold true to not posting anything about another story until I finish the one I'm currently working on. but this one is neither forgotten or totally abandoned. later
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 4: What Do We Do Now!
'Oh, and now you are trying to talk me into assasinating the two of you?' .... I was laughing so hard. I shouldn't have, but couldn't help it. So good this story. Going to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Draccone. That was a funny statement, LOL!
Reviewer: Hannah (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2012 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 39: Double Trouble
i just found this story and it's brilliant! will it ever be completed? :D
Author's Response: Hi, so glad to hear from you, Hannah; and thank you so much for taking the time to comment and leave such a FLATTERY one... I'm smiling all over. And, yes, the story will be completed. However, right now I'm a college student with a demanding schedule. So, maybe I might be able to finish the story during the holiday break this November.
Thanks again for reading the story,commenting on it, and inquiring about it. Again... it will be finish. Actually, I plan to finish every unfinished story I have here. Sincerely, Brianawriter real name Delores.
Reviewer: amomuito (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2012 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 3: Up Against A Wall
Que adrenalina! Muito boa a trama da história. Fiquei tensa com o momento em que Justin dá as costas para o atirador.
Author's Response:
Muito obrigado por responder. Esta é a primeira vez que tive alguém responder em um idioma diferente do inglês antes. Espero que eu disse isso corretamente.
Obrigado
Briana, nome real Delores
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2012 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 39: Double Trouble
ha ha ha.......Jack finally finds out. This is suppose to be serious times for the boys but somehow its funny....
love it!
Author's Response: Hi there Reader lol!
... but somehow funny... LOL! Thank you so much for that... I try not to make it too glumy ever!
Later
Brianawrtier ~ Delores
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2012 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 39: Double Trouble
more more more...........................
Author's Response: Hey Anon!
"more more more........................" put that way you got me jumping up and down with excitement! Thank you so much for that wonderful compliment. Sincerely
Brianawriter ~ Delores
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2012 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 38: I'm Impressed
Its time for Brian to let Jack know his condition so that Jack would be better able to handle the situation.
I hope he lets him know...
Author's Response: Hi, Reader:
Thanks so much for commenting as usual... love it. I don't think Brian's going to tell pops because he too sensitive about Jack's criticism of him. However, we see... there are other ways of Jack finding out though lol.
Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a comment.
Brianawriter ~ Delores
Reviewer: Jerri (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2012 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 37: Don't!
Loving this sorry. Can,t wait for the next chapter. Update soon please. Sorry I haven,t reviewed before, but I,ve been reading the stories from my ipad2 and didn,t know it won,t let be review ,so I had to go back to my laptop. I back now and will review more now.
Author's Response: Hi, Jerri... and thank you so much for taking the time to comment... so glad to hear from you.
I'm working on the next update... hope to put it out soon.
Thanks again for commenting.
Brianawriter ~ Delores
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2012 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 37: Don't!
The action begins! Thank you for these two chapters. Completely enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Reader, thank you so much (as usual) for taking the time to comment letting me know how much you're enjoying the stories.
Will try update again by this Saturday coming up.
Reviewer: silvermoon8916 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2012 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 35: Sure Fire Suicide
so glad that u updeted it.I hope thay u go on and update this story more often.
Mosam
Author's Response: Hey there, Silvermoon! Thanks for commenting again. I'll try to update again as soon as I can.
Thanks again for taking the time to let me know that you're still with me. I really appreciate it. Hav Fun! Talk to you later.
Brianawrtier ~ Delores
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2012 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 35: Sure Fire Suicide
Its kind of sad that Brian didn't tell his father about the " bunnies in the oven" but then what would have been Jack's reaction?
Brian may not be feeling too confident but when the pregnancy hormones kick in.....G boss look out!
Loving it!!
Author's Response: Hi, again Reader.
And thanks so much! I have to take a little break for test week at school. However, I might get around to updating next week again!
thank care talk 2 you later.
Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2012 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 34: You Stay Put
I was glad to see an update for this one thanks
Author's Response: Hi, again Andromeda:
I'm so glad to hear from you again. Thanks for taking the time to let me know you are enjoying the story. Stay w/me and continue 2 hav fun.
Briana (Delores)
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Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2012 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 34: You Stay Put
finally an update!!
thank goodness!
wow!! a pregnant assassin - very dangerous. love it!
Author's Response: Hi, Reader.... making my day to hear from you again.
A pregnant assassin - very dangerous.... ROFLMAO
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2011 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 33: Updated Aug 29, 2011 / My Gun or Yours?
more please
Author's Response: More to come my dear.... thanks 4 enjoying and letting me know.
Reviewer: Joanna (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2011 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 1: MAWPI
I am loving this story. Will continue to read.
Author's Response: Hi, thanks 4 commenting and let me know U love the story. I have been away for the weekend and just getting back; but I hope to update again very soon!
Stay w/me and continue 2 hav fun! Brianawriter @ Delores
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 30: Updated Aug. 3, 2011 / Forgive Yourself
Ohhhhh. Is Brian pregnant, that would certainly make things more interesting wouldn't it? Thanks for the quick updates.
Author's Response: Hmm.... Someone's quite perceptive, LOL! Stay tuned, and have fun.
Thanks so much Debv3 for commenting. Brianawriter @ Delores.
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: August 03, 2011 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 30: Updated Aug. 3, 2011 / Forgive Yourself
more more more I like
Author's Response: Oh yeah, Meme... and you'd get more more more... I so glad U're having fun alongside me. Stay tuned, LOL!
Thanks, Meme 4 taking the time 2 comment often.
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2011 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 29: Updated Aug 1, 2011 / I Just Don't Want To Do This Anymore
more more more love this
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Meme.... that's a REALLY BIG compliment! Hav fun... will update again very soon. Brianawriter@ Delores
Reviewer: julimango (Anonymous) · Date: July 18, 2011 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 28: Updated July 17, 2011 / What Kind of Monster Am I?
wow i didn't expect that!!! update soon ;)
Author's Response: Hi, Julimango:
Thanks some much 4 commenting and I'm SO GLAD U R enjoyiing it. Hav Fun! ~~~ Brianawriter @ Delores
Reviewer: silvermoon8916 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2011 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 25: Updated July 10, 2011 / He Never Misses His Target
thanks a lot for update.eager for more.
hugs.M.Sa
Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you for taking the time two comment. HAV Fun!
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 2: Sorry, Sunshine... But You're Dead!
Oooh, this is good. It sounds like Brian is a baddy and he's going after a pregnant Justin, who's carrying his baby no less! Fantastic storyline!
Author's Response: Hi, Bigdogz09, I see U just started. hav fun - I hope U enjoy. This one is has sort of a Comic book flair about it, or something. It's Danger around every corner, say to speak LOL!
Thanks again 4 taking the time 2 comment.
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 23: Updated June 28, 2011 / The Boogey Man
Glad to see this updated...
Author's Response: Wow! You're welcome; I will update again soon (but not today because I'll be out most of the day). I didn't expect any responses, and got 2 of them. Thanks!
Reviewer: SARA (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2011 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 23: Updated June 28, 2011 / The Boogey Man
HI . IAM VERY GLAD YOU UPDAIT AGIN I HOPE YOU COUNTINUE MORE STOREI
Author's Response: Hi, I'm glad 2 hear from U. Will try to update again very soon. Thanks 4 tuning in and Hav Fun.
Brianawriter
Reviewer: Jessikaa (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 22: Who's Up Next?
I loooooooooove this story but do you intent on finishing it??! Because, sincerely, it would be a shame not to!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Jessikaa. However, between caring for an illed mother and recently returning to college to complete a degree (I started pursuing a long time ago), I just can't find the time to read or post here any more; Mom's and school is just so demanding. So, I just drop by occasionally now and then to check reviews.
Thanks for taking the time to express how much you like the story, and someday (after graduation) I will finish the stories.
Sincerely ~ BrianaWriter (Delores)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 22: Who's Up Next?
when will the next chapter be added i like this story
Author's Response: Thank U, so much dear. However, I don't write or read here any more. I just check the site once in awhile to see if anyone left a comment. I think it would be very rude of me to let reader's comments go unaddressed.
So thanks again for expressing your enjoyment, but I can't promise you when I will continue with the story. However, I've not one to (usually) leave things undone, so therefore it is a likelihood that I will complete this story (as well as all of the other incompleted ones) some day.
Thanks again, and sorry I couldn't give you a more definite answer.
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