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Real name: Sabine Status: Member Member Since: April 27, 2010 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by Sab123 Summary:
Sometimes things happen that shouldn't, and change everything. What if Justin wasn't so lucky at the party in 214? Categories: QAF-U.S., FEATURED STORY, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, Violence, What If, Rape Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 362201 [Report This] Published: September 25, 2008 Updated: January 08, 2012
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Date: January 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Tomorrow "And it was all fucking perfect." Indeed, it is. What a fucking perfect end to this incredible story. I am happy you have now written the last chapters, because it so much deserves to be a finished piece of work. The last chapters flow with exactly the beautiful timing and storytelling you accomplished rigth from the beginning. Thank you very much for this outstanding story. Author's Response: Thank you! I just couldn't not finish it. I'm glad you thought the final chapters worked, and that they weren't disconnected from the rest of the story because of the huge time gap in between posting them. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :) Summary:
Brian and Justin try to cope with life apart - with the marriage that did not happen and the love that would not die NOTE: Cyn has been having health issues and it limits how much time she can sit in front of a keyboard. She's getting better and told me this story has about 5 more chapters to go; however, it may take a while to get them written. ~JTSecrets, admin Categories: BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, QAF-U.S., FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Could be Canon, Hurt/Comfort, Justin/Other, Romance, Violence Characters: Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 784049 [Report This] Published: August 27, 2009 Updated: November 17, 2012
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Date: October 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Cync, I am happy to see that you are getting better and have started to write again. Please take all the time you need for recovery, your health is one of the most precious gifts in life. I truly admire you for this brilliant plot and the energy and patience you have had with this story right from the beginning. I hope the voices in your head don´t stop whispering :-), helping you developing the story arch till the succesful end. I´ll wait patiently. Sabine Summary:
Justin is a cake designer who rubs Brian the wrong way. Justin/Emmett friendship, Justin/Brian romance story.
Categories: QAF-U.S., FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, What If Characters: Emmett, Gus, Justin, Michael, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 210380 [Report This] Published: December 28, 2010 Updated: December 28, 2010
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Date: January 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Duel Over The Dimetrodon! Wow, I`ve just finished this story after a four days reading marathon, only interrupted by the new year festivities. Fortunatly the "bad" weather with all the snow and cold outside gave me good reason to stay inside and enjoy your story. I love this story with all the funny turns, the witty dialogues and the way you expose and develop the characters. You are a wonderfull addition to the MW community. I´m eagerly awaiting more of your stories. And I really, really favour completed stories. So: Thank you for this beautiful 200.000 words story. Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the welcome! I am really enjoying being able to come up with banners to go with my stories - I think that adds a lot to them, don't you? I thought Justin, being an artist, would be a perfect match for a cake designer. Thanks again for reading. BTW - I have some more (longer) stories that are completed that I will try to post soon - one is 45 chapters long, though, so that may take me a while!:) Hope you give them a try once I DO get them posted, though. Summary:
Justin is a talented artist haunted by terrifying visions. Brian Kinney is a cynical police detective who doesn't believe in psychics. What happens, though, when his police work strikes too horrifying close to home? AU Story. **THIS STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!!**
Categories: QAF-U.S., FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, REAL LIFE ISSUES, Violence Characters: Daphne, Gus, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 212447 [Report This] Published: March 26, 2011 Updated: March 04, 2012
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Date: February 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: The Different Shades of Love Great update. Thank you. Very clever construction of how Carruthers got free from the hospital and police surveillance. And I fear, now Justins worst dreams will come true. Author's Response: Hi, Sabine, my friend! Thanks for reading and for your comments; I really appreciate that. I tried to come up with a plausible way that Carruthers could break free from his confinement, so hopefully I succeeded in that.:) Thank you for all your support of my stories! I will get this updated again very soon, probably as soon as I finish updating the next part of "Parent Trap." *Hugs* ~Kimberly Summary:
This story started off as a ‘what if’ ... what if Brian hadn’t met Justin until sometime in Season Three? Which things would be different and which would be the same ... or brought about in a different way? How would Brian be different? Would he be better, or would he be worse? Would he still react to Justin in the same way if they were both a couple of years older?
Anyway, that was how it started; but then I had to supply a background for Justin that was canon to begin with, but ended up being quite different ... and then the whole thing turned into a kind of thriller. Well, I hope it did.
So I guess this is part what-if, part AU, part thriller ... but most of all, of course, a love story.
NOW COMPLETE! YAY! I hope you enjoy it. Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 68 Completed: Yes Word count: 157418 [Report This] Published: July 08, 2011 Updated: December 05, 2011
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Date: October 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 I am following this story from the first chapter, because it has a great combination of angst und humor. Brian's remarks and thoughts sometime crack me up.
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Date: December 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 I have started reading this story a couple of weeks ago and I was hooked from the beginning. I love this story. From the Prolog with Jason hiding the photograph in Justins sketchbook (even though we don't know at this point who is doing what) till the last chapters when Brian and Justin eventually find the missing evidence. The story is built with so many setups and payoffs and well constructed turning points that you never stop reading. And all the characters feel real to me. This story would deserve a blue ribbon. I hope, you will get one. Thank you and keep on writing. Summary:
Brian thinks he has lost Justin in the bombing, not realizing that he has unexpectedly moved to New York. For the next four years they live their lives apart. They meet again and realize that its far from over between them...But can they fix the mistakes of the past and find their way to a future together? Categories: QAF-U.S., Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin/Other, Drama, Romance, What If Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 95844 [Report This] Published: September 24, 2011 Updated: October 29, 2011
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Date: October 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Hometown Glory This story is getting better with every chapter. For a first time writer you are doing an amazing job. Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliment - it mean a lot to me. I hope that people will stick with this story to the end and like it; and I hope to continue writing after this story is finished. Thanks for reading! Vin
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Date: October 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Britin Did I say that I am in love with Zoe? She will be exactly the EA that Brian needs. Your description of Britin and the pacing of the dialog is beautiful done, no need to be anxious about it. I enjoyed this chapter. Author's Response: Thank you! I am really glad that Zoe's character turned out well. just like I hoped it would. I truly appreciate your comments. Thanks for reading AND reviewing
Cheers, Vin Summary:
Brian Kinney is a self made billionaire – several times over. He lives on the premise that the world is his playground. Justin Taylor is about to enter his world, challenging the man who has everything, but the sweet temptation of a prize he wants to own most of all – the seemingly unattainable Justin. How far will Brian go to make Justin his?
*** Story now complete w/Epilogue! *** Categories: QAF-U.S., FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Out of Character Characters: Ethan Gold, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 54356 [Report This] Published: October 08, 2011 Updated: March 14, 2012
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Date: October 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue I have started reading this story on an other site. But it's true, it is much easier reading a story here. And I am already hooked with this story, love the plot.
Thank you so much. I do hope you will enjoy my OOC Brian no matter which site you fall into it on. :) Thanks so much for the lovely feedback. I appreciate that! :)
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Date: October 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 Argh, again such an evil timing for the end of the chapter! "Brian knew without a doubt he ... never wanted anything more. His patience had just ended." That's exactly what I am feeling now. I want the next chapter pwleeze! Author's Response: It was a bad place to end for certain... but what I decided to do for the flow of the story. I will jump back to them as quickly as I can. Thanks so much for your comments. I do appreciate that! :)
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Date: November 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Argh. You did it again! You are the queen of cliffhangers, aren't you? Always teasing your readers and then ... just wait for the next chapter. Very well done! Every publisher would be proud of you. :-)) Sabine Author's Response: It's good to be queen of something, right?!? LOL. I have been moving along slowly on this one - hoping when we get to the meat of the story it will have been worth the wait. I'm so glad you are enjoying it, though. If it helps at all, the 24 hours they are about to share should span over at least three chapters - if not more. I think the Brian in this story deserves nothing less than numerous encounters & great detail. I am hoping to achieve that to his grand satisfaction. Lol. Thanks so much for your comments. I appreciate that immensely! Too many WIP's slow me down, but I have a couple close to being finished. Phew. I will get back to them as quickly as I can. :)
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Date: November 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 Wow. What a beginning of the weekend. And it was just a starter. :-) Thank you. Author's Response: Yes. Just the beginning. This weekend should span over many chapters. I'm so glad you liked it. More to come as soon as I can. Thanks so much for your comment!! :)
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Date: January 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 Thank you for the update! That was hot, as always. New York ist waiting (or maybe not). It´s gonna be interesting to see how living together will work out for them. Author's Response: You are so welcome. I'm glad you are enjoying it. Yes, we'll see how Justin responds to what Brian has to tell him. Things may or may not go the way Mr. Kinney hopes after that. Thanks for reading & your comments. :)
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Date: February 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 Back to real life for the two lovers now. I feel Brian will learn, that not everything can be bought, especially little blonds. Author's Response: Yes, back to the real world! In time I think Brian will learn Justin cannot be bought. A new concept for him for certain. Thanks so much for reading & commenting! =) Summary:
This may seem totally silly, but I was at a restaurant like this and this story immediately came to mind, to which my muse responded with “I don’t fucking think so” and a smirk… so here’s a goofy story for our boys at lunch. I did research for these types of places, and there is one in Pittsburgh, and I used it’s real name; just thought I’d mention that… you’re gonna have to read the story to know what type of place I’m talking about though. Categories: QAF-U.S., Brian/Justin, Humor, Unsafe Sex Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 32914 [Report This] Published: October 08, 2011 Updated: October 28, 2011
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Date: October 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Sweet chapter, but I loved the previous chapters too. Your description of the tea room was amazing in detail, I could picture every single bit of food Justin and Brian were eating. I always thought that the way people eat can be amazingly sexy, you proved it in words.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and compliment. I don't go to tea rooms often, but it was so much fun, and I could imagine Justin loving the place, the style, the food, and of course the company. :) Eating can be amazingly sexy and I wanted to show that even simple food like sandwiches and cookies could be sexy... I mean they're finger foods... Fingers have to bring the food to the mouth... and these are Justin's and Brian's mouths and fingers... that makes it all the more sexy. Thank you, Cheers, Laura :) Summary:
Justin is a successful rockstar. His life begins to become less than idyllic when he is threatened by a mysterious stalker. How will the spoiled diva respond to the best bodyguard in the business - the outspoken and beautiful Brian Kinney? Many sparks will fly.
*** This story is now complete! *** Categories: QAF-U.S., FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 68247 [Report This] Published: October 08, 2011 Updated: February 06, 2012
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Date: October 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 LOL! Justin a diva, I can totally see it. Great idea! Author's Response: Justin does have a good share of diva moments in this story. It's so easy for me to visualize, in turn write it out as well. :) Glad you are enjoying. Thanks for the feedback! :)
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Date: October 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 Ben is the villain? What a horribly surprise. I have never expected that. And now there are a lot of questions. Why did Ben hire Brian? Why did Ben help Brian to move Justin und his kid to a safer place. And, and ... Eagerly awaiting the next chapter here. :-)
Author's Response: We'll see what Ben has to say about this. Things might not be entirely as they seem. More coming as soon as I can. Thank you for reading & commenting. :)
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Date: November 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 Ah, this story isn't any longer going the way I was expecting. It will be interesting to see where you will take it. Daphne!? I can't believe it, there must be an other explanation. Author's Response: I know this twist changed many things. We'll see if something else could be going on. Regardless, with what Frank has found he needs to go on the offensive until proven differently. The answers will be developing very soon now that the story is almost to an end. More coming soon. Thank you for reading & commenting. :) Summary:
Brian is a cursed 300 year old vampire. As the owner of Babylon, he uses that as his stage for seduction and feeding. No man can resist him. Justin Taylor is about to enter his world and slowly change his reality. How will primal Brian respond?
*** Story Now Completed! *** Categories: QAF-U.S., FEATURED STORY, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, Alternate Universe, Angst, Anti-Ethan, Brian/Justin, Jealousy, Out of Character, Vampires Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 76450 [Report This] Published: October 11, 2011 Updated: October 19, 2011
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Date: October 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 It is great to see you publishing your older stories again here at MW. But unfortunatly I am not in vampire stories. True Blood, Vampire diaries, .... they are not my cup of coffee or may I say my cup of blood. Ups. But I am happily reading your other stories. Thanks. Author's Response: Thank you. It's really good to be back. I do understand that this story, along with my crossover with The Secret Circle will not be to everyone's tastes. Both are very dark, but hopefully end up in good places. I do hope you continue to enjoy the other stories that are not a part of the supernatural world. Thanks for the comment. I appreciate hearing your thoughts. :) Summary:
Sequel to "A Little Less Conversation, A Little More Action." Justin agrees to help a teenage Gus with his retro rock band, but what happens when someone develops a crush on him? What will he do? And how will father and son react? **STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!** Categories: QAF-U.S., Brian/Justin, Humor, Jealousy, Minor's Sexuality, Romance Characters: Gus, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 54129 [Report This] Published: October 13, 2011 Updated: January 26, 2012
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Date: October 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: You're The Devil In Disguise Justin in a white Elvis costume ... this is going to be fun. But I theink, he will be amazing, with his voice and the propper ass shake. Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for commenting, Sabine! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I saw Randy in "Tommy" last July, and trust me, his ass was shaking just as wonderfully as it did when he was doing that pole dancing during the King of Babylon contest - LOL! I think he could give Elvis a run for the money in that department with the hip shaking, too! Thanks for leaving a comment - I promise to get this updated soon.:)
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Date: November 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: I Can't Help Falling In Love With You What a great story! I always wonder, where you get your plot ideas from. Gus is in love with Rob and Rob is in love with Justin. That's going to be an interesting triangle. Gus and Rob trying to talk about sex in the car was spot on and brought back some extremly distant memories :-)) aah, to be young again. Author's Response: Hi, Sabine! Great to hear from you again.:) I'm so pleased you're enjoying the story! As far as where I get ideas from, that's a good question.:) This one was actually suggested to me by a reader who had read the first story ("A Little Less Conversation, A Little More Action"), but unfortunately I can't recall who it was now since it's been a while. I always liked the first story, though, and thought this might be an interesting twist. I got the plot idea for "Tender Loving Care" from a reader, also, so some of them come from there. I also get some ideas from TV shows, old movies, and even a song; my love for cake designing shows developed into "Stirring Up Trouble." I have NO idea how "Wedding Present" popped into my mind, but I was glad it did, because I love Tony and Fin's characters in that story as well as the sequel. As far as the others, that's hard to say. The ideas sometime just come up for some reason and I instantly think of using them for the boys; I got one idea from a couple of newspaper articles, for example. I guess they just inspire me - LOL! I'm hoping before it's all over with that Gus and Rob will wind up together - that's my intention, anyway, but I have been known to digress from my original ideas. At any rate, I hope you'll continue to follow along and enjoy it. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review - that is so motivating to me and means so much! I promise to update this story soon.:)~Kimberly
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Date: January 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Love Me Tender Thank you! What a lovely and funny story. “So tell me; how big IS his dick?” I almost spilled my coffee over the keyboard reading this. Hilarious. As always, your characters feel like real persons. And that was exactly the question I would expect from Brian in this situation.
Author's Response: Hi, Sabine! So glad you enjoyed this one, my friend! You know Brian would be concerned about "quality," didn't you? LOL! Thank you for the lovely comments about my writing - I am very honored. And THANK YOU for all the reviews and feedback that you continue to give me - that is so appreciated! *Hugs* ~Kimberly Summary:
*** This story is complete! *** Categories: QAF-U.S., Alternate Universe, Angst, Anti-Ethan, Anti-Michael, Brian/Justin, Minor Character Death, Out of Character Characters: Ethan Gold, Justin, Michael Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 73498 [Report This] Published: November 18, 2011 Updated: January 24, 2012
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Date: January 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I read this story some time ago on an other site and I really loved it. Emmett trying to hide and protect Justin from Brian was an amazing plot idea. We knew right from the beginning that this was an almost impossible task. But what a funny and exciting reading! And for your first multi chapter story it was an amazing work. Thank you! Author's Response: Yes, I think so many probably read this elsewhere. I did edit this version a bit to eliminate mistakes I didn't catch the first time around... but, I didn't change the context of the story. Poor Emmett did try so hard in the beginning, but these two were fated - as they always are. I think Emmett began to see after awhile that Brian would never look at Justin as he did his standard trick. Being my first multi chaptered QAF story it will always be special to me. That it was enjoyed, and has found a few new readers means so much to me. Thank you so much for leaving your comment, especially having had read it already. I really appreciate that. :) Summary:
Sequel to "Bless the Beasts and the Children." Justin gets an unexpected art commission just before he and Brian plan to host Gus and the Munchers for Christmas at Britin. What will happen, though, when a certain someone decides to surprise Justin by coming to NYC to get him? **STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!**
Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S., Angst, Brian/Justin, Humor, Jealousy, Romance, Christmas Characters: Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 65053 [Report This] Published: December 11, 2011 Updated: January 19, 2012
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Date: December 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Ma Bell Never Thought About This! I am already in love with your plot (and the smut. cough) And I am a sucker for Christmas stories, it´s just this time of the year. Thanks alot. Author's Response: Hi, Sabine! Thanks so much, Sweetie, for those wonderful comments!:) I really do appreciate it.:) The boys will go off track just a bit for a little while - you know Brian - insert foot, think later! But don't worry - they'll wind up happy when it's all said and done. I promise to update this very soon - I really want to try and get this done by Christmas. Thanks again for letting me know you'll be following along.:)~Kimberly
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Date: January 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Jingle Balls: Conclusion
“Is that you breathing so heavily?” There was silence ... “I thought that was you.” LOL. Brilliant. I loved it. Thank you for this story. Author's Response: Hi, Sabine! Thank you for reading and for the lovely comments, my friend; I really appreciate that!:) So glad that you liked it. I DID enjoy Tricky's involvement in the two stories; he'll probably be showing up again; I already have another thought for a story involving him, so something tells me he'll be back.:) Thank you again for reading and especially taking the time to leave me feedback.:) *Hugs*~Kimberly |
Justin is nearing the end of his first year at PIFA. He has recently 'come out' with some harsh consequences resulting. Brian & Justin meet causing the hunt to commence much to best friend, Emmett's dismay. Can Brian be stopped from his pursuit of innocent Justin?